Fan Fiction!

[Abbot Mortimer]

If there's anything I love, it's fan fiction. So please feel free to post any of your own Redwall stories here!
( Must be of resonable length ) The author of the best story will be awarded 20 posts.

[Skipper Lynn]

Flung into gritty sand, pushed and beaten unmercifully. He tried to run, he tried to hide, and he tried to escape into himself. Nothing seemed to stray, to stop his tormentors.

"He's such a geek."

"Ha! More like a yellow bellied lizard."

They laughed at his wretchedness, at their cruelty. Finally they left him to find another source of entertainment. Their leader directed the gang away from the otter leaving him on the ground. The terrorizes’ voices slowly drifted and where cutted off by the crashing surf. The otter slowly pushed himself to his feet. A small gash above his brow trickled with blood. He ignored it, quickly limping off in the opposite direction of the gang.

The gang was any creature and every creature but there were the unvarying members that were the instigators. The ringleader and her cronies caused havoc whenever possible. Of course they were punished but the weasel was a street urchin allowing her complete freedom of her actions. Linwe was her name. How the otter despised that insufferable rodent.

Lynn limped around and over the sandy dunes. Coarse shrubs helped him steady himself along the shifting landscape. The otter finally stumbled onto his favorite spot along the beach. It was a small inlet created by an ancient dried up rivulet. Lynn shivered and panted. These painful confrontations where starting to take their toll emotionally and physically.

Bullying wasn’t half as bad compared to the loneliness Lynn felt. No one had ever stood up for him. No one had ever given him a helping hand or a kind smile. No one even talked to the otter except to tease and taunt him. Everyone, including what many creatures thought as gentle sweet girls, came to watch Lynn be batter. They watched, encouraged, and contributed to the otter’s misery.

Lynn shivered and his body ached but did not pant anymore. He gathered himself against a rock shelf. The water dog drew his legs to his body, rested his head on his knees, and then closed his eyes. For only a moment he tried to imagine peace.

Soft filtered light and waltzing specs of dust drifted through the air on a background of reddish-pink. A strong but gentle voice spoke. It did not speak out loud. It spoke just to Lynn; it came from inside him. Put on courage. Face your fears. Face them now.

To be continued.

*Linwe the weasel is my other character.

[Lady Amber]

Yay, go Linn! A very good beggining, but I want to read more. You've set Redwall in modern times, and done it very well too. Well done!

(I'm awarding you five points for going first, and for the brilliant beggininf to a story.)

Lady Amber

[Moonwind]

Yes - it's a great story! Please continue!

[Friar Birch]

TEXT

Late summer winds blow the dibbuns kites over the sparkling waters of the sea next to Salamandastron, mountain of the fiery lizard. Mostly made up with hares but, Elachim the Badger Lord’s lovely daughter Moonstripe and, his fierce looking son Oakclaw, who later becomes Oakclaw the Firm, is wrestling with some other hares. So Badger Lord Elachim the Crusher looks out over the clear waters of the sea wear he can see his otter friend Elmweed and, Elmweed’s wife Rosepearl and there knew baby otter Oak. The otter family are getting ready to leave with Loglalog and, The Guosim witch stans for Guerilla Unoin Of Shrews In Mossflower in their swift flowing crafts that Logalog’s friend Chief Burble, boss of the River’ead watervoles help make. The otter family was ready to leave for Redwall Abbey to tell them that we need help building back the mountain’s woodwork, too grow back some of the vegetation and to help berry the friends and family you lost there lives for freedom. After the war some of the mountin and the plants were destroyed. Then all of a sadin their was a knock on the big oak door. Elmweed walk in with his wife and babey to say goodbye and see you in the fall and then they left. Then there was another knock but it sounded like little fists banging. Then Elachim’s wife Lady Rosebud she had with her nineteen dibbuns one mole, three hares, one mouse, and both his kids, two shrews, one squirrel, two otters, two hedgehogs, two waterhogs, one watervole, one river’ead watervole and one weasel. Elachim ask his wife Rosebud’what do they want?" The dibbuns yelled at the top of their longs "we want a story." Then the mole began to speak with his high top squkey voice" e unt atory zir." "If you say so tunnelclaw" the badger voice boomed out. The two otter twins Daisy and Bumble yelled" we get a story, we get a story!" The badger lady said in a sweet voice "set down, set down" the babes did what the were told. Okey lisen up it all started many years ago before you were born I was the son of a badgermum name Cregga Rose Eyes. I ruled after Russano the Wises family did in the mountain. I was born after a great feast at the abbey.

[Abbot Mortimer]

Yay! Fanfiction! ;D Keep it coming!